Roleplay feedback

Same deal as with Ashe, just gonna go with what pops into my head as I reread your stuff. I'm also looking forward to working with you again.

I like the scene set up you do as if your watching a clip or something online or on T.V. Helps the talking points flow a bit better I think. Personally, I dislike that you use gifs at the opening of your promos, I get why but my net sucks and it makes the site load wonky. Take that criticism with a truckload of salt, as it's just a thought I've had. I think you could do with a bit more character voice, I.E. having Maddy specifically share some experiences instead of just reacting to the match or the other characters. Give us a reason to be invested in anything she's saying because we feel invested in her. I do like the character concept as a whole, more descriptions in your writing might help though. As for the writing itself, it works, moves nicely from one bit to the next. I don't have a hard time getting through it. That's all I've got for right now if you wanna ask for any specifics feel free.