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Post by Vitoly Volkov on Oct 4, 2017 12:49:52 GMT -8
I would appreciate it if some people could read my latest promo for my match with Jeremy Starling. I am slowly figuring this character out and would like to know if I am headed in the right direction.
Thank you in advance.
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Post by Kevin Moss on Oct 6, 2017 12:48:12 GMT -8
The third person approach is interesting. Sometimes the lines get blurred as to who is delivering the information. Is Vitoly speaking at all or is there some sort of narration over his promos? I'm not saying either way is bad, just some clarification might help along the way.
Writing quality is strong and I get a clear picture of what Volkov is about. Instead of just doing the typical "brute" Russian character, it seems like Vitoly has a great deal of depth to him. Overall, I like the direction this character is going and would like to learn more about him in future writing.
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Post by Vitoly Volkov on Oct 15, 2017 13:46:37 GMT -8
The third person approach is interesting. Sometimes the lines get blurred as to who is delivering the information. Is Vitoly speaking at all or is there some sort of narration over his promos? I'm not saying either way is bad, just some clarification might help along the way. Writing quality is strong and I get a clear picture of what Volkov is about. Instead of just doing the typical "brute" Russian character, it seems like Vitoly has a great deal of depth to him. Overall, I like the direction this character is going and would like to learn more about him in future writing. I appreciated your feedback and have incorporated it into my latest promo. I would like to know if this is what you had in mind.
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